People get stressed by daily life such as work load and pressure, relationship among other people at work and personal life. Despite overnight sleep, there is always residual fatigue. Especially, I have always less sleep than what I need to fully recover due to chronic amnesia. So I always wait for a weekend like other people, but I would like to address a few specifics that make my weekend so sweet. (4 sentences)
First, the more stress I get, the sweeter weekend I have. There is an old saying: "No pain, no gain!" Whenever I work hard under pressure such as multiple incoming due dates, I get easily stressed. It becomes often not easy task for me to take enough overnight sleep due to continuous concern of my work. Work related stress disturbs my good night sleep, and left over fatigue is then carried over to the next day. This pattern readily accumulates a great deal of stress over week days and a weekend shall be the last chance to relieve all stresses and fatigue. Therefore, I always notice that I had a good working week whenever I feel much happier than previous Friday: thus the sweeter I feel on Friday evening, the more productive week I had. (8 sentences)
Second, complete rest without any activity over a weekend doesn't always guarantee full recover. Sometime, I feel that I need a complete rest without doing anything over a weekend, and then become a couch potato. Stay inside and minimize movement except changing TV channels with fingers. Then, Sunday afternoon I start feeling fatigue, which becomes greater in the next day morning. Well, what I learned from the experience is the complete rest doesn’t mean to be a complete couch potato. Now, I try to find something useful and good for physical and mental health. These activities could be varied by people, but I like surfing the Internet, going to grocery shopping with my family, and raking leaves, etc. (7 sentences)
For the conclusion, what makes my
weekend so specific and sweet depends on how I mix rest and weekend
activities. Sweet rest is necessary and
the balancing it with appropriate weekend activity is essential for me. (2 sentences)
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